Nice beginning...good groove..I like that you started out with the chorus..good technique..I would rather hear a better sampling of the rain...and going back and forth in stereo..would be a nice touch..and not so long..Now ...I am not really a rap or hip hop fan...but it would be nice if you composed a vocal singing type version...because the chorus is so strong..it begs for an explanation...a story telling song...just my opinion now...just remember there are no rules...so learn the rules and break them...this way...you will be an innovator instead of an imitator...so far...well done my brothers...keep me posted...
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